Hartfield Had Two Winners in the Hinds Literary Festival

We are so proud of 11th graders Starlee Rebecca Weir (short stories) and Marley Dew (essay) for winning their categories in the Hinds Literary Festival put on by Hinds CC. 

You can read their entries by clicking the title:
We are so proud of 11th graders Starlee Rebecca Weir (short stories) and Marley Dew (essay) for winning their categories in the Hinds Literary Festival put on by Hinds CC. 

You can read their entries here:

Starlee Rebecca Weir's short story entry:

Heart and Soul

     It was bright out, the kind of bright that calls out to the small, young families with little children to go out and play. Large cumulus clouds decorated the light blue sky, creating different shapes of animals and objects that kids would daydream about. There was a smell of early summer, late spring deep in the cool breeze that lurked around the green grass, slightly damp with morning dew. This same breeze traveled throughout the meager town, infiltrating open windows and intruding on the building's inhabitants. One building in particular housed a painter deeply invested in his craft. 

     He was an exceptionally skilled painter, often painting realistic portraits of men and women. He would put his heart and soul into his paintings, attempting to truly capture the essence of his subject. From the subject's eyes, nose, and mouth, all the way to the loose strands of hair that flew loose on the person's head, he would paint it in incredible detail. He made good money from his work too. He lived in a respectable home, filled with finished and unfinished pieces, and the extremely potent smell of turpentine.

     He was an incredibly sociable man despite his intense dedication to his work. Most inhabitants of the little town knew of the excellent painter. He had many friends, and many knew him by name. He would meet old college buddies at the local bar and would also be seen hanging around the park, soaking in sun rays while gathering inspiration for his next masterpiece.

     However, there was a melancholic shift in the man after the death of his young lover. She had suddenly died of a stroke, leaving the man a widower left with only the company of oil on stretched canvas. She was gone. His love was gone. He would still occasionally leave the house, but only when he was on the verge of starvation. He no longer accompanied his friends at the bar, and the park had not seen his once happy face in months. 

     One bright, sunny day, inspiration ignites the sullen man and gives him a glimmer of hope for the first time since his lover's untimely demise. He went to his easel, clearing it of an unfinished project that was likely to never get worked on again. He collected his supplies and canvas, setting them strategically around his workplace. The painter had never drawn a portrait completely from his own memory; however, he would never forget the face of his beautiful love.

     He started on the underpainting of her face. There was almost something eerie about the finished rough draft of this new project. The quick painting looked like her, it had her essence…but it was not her. This uncanny version of his love almost made the man start over, but strangely, he was too tired. He had planned on working for at least four more hours, but he was growing exhausted. He covered his pallet and cleaned his brushes, the smell of turpentine evident in the room almost to the point that it was suffocating. The man went to sleep, cold at the loss of the young woman that once slept there. He awoke in the night, a slight chill going up his spine. The urge to paint was itching through his entire body. He wanted to paint. He needed to paint. The man got up and went to his easel. He looked at her for a minute. He gazed upon the faint outline of his love. He felt her calling to him. He wasn't sure when he had picked up the wooden paint brush, but his love’s face was now more defined. It was as if her face was calling to him. He continued working until the sun rose, and then he worked some more. Some people could have called the painting finished at this point, but the man did not. 

     “No, no it’s not good enough. It’s not her.”

     He frantically looked at the supposed painting of his deceased wife. It had a clear resemblance of his lost love, but in his eyes, in his heart, and in his soul it was not her. The man went to add more paint to his pallet, but then it dawned on him. The man had not bought paint in months. He struggled standing up, feeling somewhat lighter than usual. He went to move and had to steady himself in order to stay upright. He stumbled out the door, leaving his unfinished piece behind. 

     The people in the town almost didn't recognize the once lively fellow. He used to be a well built man, strong and filled out. However, as he walked through the market, his new, gaunt face haunted anyone who gazed upon it. He looked sick and tired. He looked drained of any life and color that was once so prevalent. This man was not the man that this town once knew.

     He didn't speak a word to anyone while he was out. He seemed in a rush, despite the obvious trouble he was having being mobile. The people in the town started wondering what had happened: 

     “Was he in some sort of accident?”

     “Has he stopped eating and sleeping entirely?”

     “Maybe he’s gone mad!”

     The man arrived shortly after his dire, yet short trip to the market. He immediately went back to work on the painting. The canvas had not moved from its spot on the easel, and the subject’s gaze still lingered in the same, intended direction. The depiction of the man’s wife was a beautiful and youthful portrait of a fair skinned woman with dark, luscious locks that cascaded across her shoulders, almost like a silk shawl. Her eyes were fixated at a three-fourths angle, not quite looking towards the viewer. 

     The man started to paint. He painted, and he painted, and he painted, until he wasn't sure how many days had gone by. He had not gotten up to look at himself in the mirror, only gone from his bed to the easel repeatedly for who knows how long. He painted with a frantic style, completely different from that of his previous calm and collected technique he had perfected for years. This way of painting was different. It wasn't like him. It was as if he was being controlled by a puppeteer. The more detail he added, the more realistic she looked. He added more detail to her lips, then her nose, and then finally, her eyes. He looked at the painting so intensely that he didn't see anything else around him. This painting was everything. This painting was special. This painting…was her.

     Three days later, after receiving concerned calls from people in the town, the local police knocked on the man’s door. They had been told that the man was not eating or taking care of himself. The police knocked one more time before realizing the door was unlocked. Slightly alarmed, the two policemen walk into the painter’s home. The police are bombarded with the strong smell of turpentine when they step inside the painter’s house. As they look around, they notice nothing out of the ordinary, except that the man is nowhere to be seen. They continue searching the house until they approach the easel. They stopped and stared at the painting that was propped on the easel with dried up and spilled art supplies. The portrait displayed before them was beautiful. It was of a woman with fair skin, which almost looked as if it were glowing. The woman also had dark hair that looked like it was moving around. And her face was so lifelike. Her eyes looked straight at the viewer, the emotion that resided behind her eyes was unreadable. She looked so… alive.

     “He really puts a lot of effort into these paintings of his,” stated one of the policemen, still stunned by the beautiful piece in front of him. 

     “It looks like he puts his heart and soul into his work,” says the other policeman, who was making his way towards the painting. Something about this painting was almost speaking to him. As the police officer drew closer to the painting, the more the force called to him. He reached his hand towards the canvas, and carefully brushed his fingers against the almost dried oil paint. The policeman jerks his hand back as if he’s been burned. The skin of the woman in the painting was warm to the touch.


Marley Dew's winning essay entry:

A Generation Imprisoned by Virtually Mandated Isolation  

     We hear the word “addiction”, and our minds immediately picture the lost drug addict that we saw one time. Or maybe we imagine our distant relative that lost themselves to alcohol. Maybe we picture the coworker that swore they would quit smoking months ago. Our generation assigns a connotation to the word addiction that we all accept. Ironically, our generation is enslaved to an addiction that we refuse to acknowledge. Social media is the addiction that demolishes our human desire to commune with one another. Ironically, the very thing that we use to connect ourselves with others is ultimately what isolates us, leaving us feeling lonely, but drawing us back in constantly. 

      Middle school me was comparable to most middle school girls; emotional, naive, and desperately trying to fit in. Above all of my common desires, I can now admit that I wanted nothing more than to be invited to birthday parties and sleepovers. My first ever phone that I had received for my eleventh birthday over the summer gave me access to a new world that I was yet to discover. Although I was naive, loneliness was no stranger to me. I had known my fair share of sitting alone on the playground and having a mind filled with fear when a teacher announced group work. But nothing could have prepared me for the first time I opened TikTok to see my group of friends hanging out without me. Of course, not getting invited to one hangout cannot be that big of a deal. But each time I saw that I was not included slowly instilled the idea that I was not good enough into my young mind. Each day when I got home from school, I would check social media to see who all was hanging out. While I gradually became more despondent and hopeless, I knew in my mind that the simple solution to my predicament was to delete TikTok. Something kept drawing me in daily, however, and that same something draws millions of teenagers worldwide into a pandemic of loneliness and self-deprecating thinking. 

     Many can recall attending the anti-bullying assemblies in school. A movie captures the classic archetypal school bully: name-calling, starting fights, and taking lunch money from other kids. This kind of character might have been realistic in the 80s and 90s, but many children in today’s world do not know of a bully like this. The bullies of this generation lack the confidence that previous bullies had. Instead of openly fighting and messing with kids at school, the bullies of this generation hide cowardly behind the safety of their screens like a hunter waiting to annihilate an innocent deer behind the safety of their gun. Many people limit the role of the “cyberbully” to sending malicious texts, but a vast majority of cyberbullying is not acknowledged. Boys enter a chat on a video game and tear each other apart in the name of “joking around”. Girls use a private story to ruthlessly make fun of the “weird kid” in their class and then use a public story to post Bible verses or quotes to create an innocent persona for themselves. Teenagers use the safety blanket of “just joking around”, but the course of time has proven that it truly only takes one screenshot, one rumor, or one unkind word to ruin someone’s self-worth.   

     This generation grew up hearing: “Comparison is the thief of joy”. I certainly remember hearing this phrase whenever I complained about not having the same toys as the other kids in elementary school. Growing past elementary school, I have concluded that comparison will never be escaped. What many teenagers do not realize is that we all are trapped by subconscious comparison every time we indulge in social media. A young girl opens Instagram to see pictures of women; completely unaware that that picture was heavily edited. Fitness influences invade the minds of boys, distorting their idea of what a natural body should look like, and leading them into body dysmorphia and low self-esteem. Many of us have access to nice cars, families, and clothes. Yet, when we open our eyes to the boasting of wealthy influencers online, we make ourselves feel inferior.  Our human nature makes us naturally inclined to want more. Social media is a catalyst in our human desire, worsening our condition and leaving us unable to be satisfied with our own lives and possessions.  

     This generation can have the appearance of being connected; but the souls behind the screens desperately long for true, real-life connection. Kids can meet each other on Snapchat, keep up with each other on Instagram, and learn new things on TikTok, but social media will never be able to fulfil our human desire for genuine connection. If I could revisit any time in my life, I would go back to the time in which I was running down my driveway to my mom in my little ballerina dress. I was untouched by the hands of social media, and blissfully unaware of the cruel world around me. Now as a teenager, I continue to run back to the virtual world, enslaved by my own human desires. The future of our world is in the hands of a generation of kids addicted to their own loneliness and imprisoned by the things that were created to connect us. This generation is powerful, talented, educated, and competitive, and yet, a five-inch screen is what limits us from achieving all that we are equipped for. Overall, social media can be summarized in one phrase: loneliness disguised as connection. 
 
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